Foxpaw The Apprentice of echoclan

name : foxpaw ~ foxwing ~ foxheart
age : 11 moons
gender : she
personlaiy : kind caring sweet
rank : apprentice 
clan : echoclan
history : plot
family :
mother abyssstar
father tigerleaf
siblings Bunnypaw Bearpaw Chickenpaw

Hi! This is a great first auditon! but it needs a little work

First Of, Littlelily can't be her mother! Abyssstar has to be all echoclan cat's mothers (Littlelily and Wolfpaw are speacial) 

Secondly, 12 Moons is warrior age! 0-6 Is Kits, 6-12 is apprentices and 12+ is warriors.

Finnaly, She needs more 'bad' traits, like selfish, ect.

Welcome to the site and cant wait to see you in roleplay!

okay so she sould be 11 moons?
but shes perfect :/
also why abyssstar?

Yes Foxy

she cant be perfect :/ you didnt pm me about her having powers

It says here

#Firstbump @Foxwing

fixed @septi

@Septi wrote:~Please Only Tag Me If Needed~

Minus that its ACCEPTED~

so i can rp her?

Yep